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Re: [16NG] I-DAction:draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-05.txt

"Riegel, Maximilian (NSN - DE/Munich)" <maximilian.riegel@nsn.com> Thu, 04 June 2009 22:59 UTC

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From: "Riegel, Maximilian (NSN - DE/Munich)" <maximilian.riegel@nsn.com>
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Please find attached the txt document with my comments, in the case your
screen looks as awful as mine (word wrapping did a horrible job)

Bye
Max

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Subject: Re: [16NG]
I-DAction:draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-05.txt

I went through the document and found a couple of issues, which I would
like to see in a better shape.
Please find my comments inline:

Bye
Max

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