[16NG] Review on FMIP6 over IEEE 802.16e Networks

To MIPSHOP WG,

Here is an official review by 16NG expert as Jinhyeock Choi. Also, two
more experts are in the progress of reviewing this document. They will
get back to MIPSHOP soon.

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I went over the draft and overall it looks fine. It presents an useful
information to efficiently run FMIPv6 over 802.16e with primitives.

I found no technical issue except one.

There are incorrect statements in Sec 3 Deployment Architecture. For
example, there can be more than 2 subnets in figure 1, whereas it's
written that 'Figure 1 shows the deployment with two IP subnets'. In
fact there can be as many subnets as the # of MNs according to
per-MN-prefix link/subnet model. I recommend to re-write the section
or remove it altogether. IMO, the draft will do fine without the
section.

I have a few more comments but they are all editorial. I'll send them
to the authors in a separate mail.

Thanks in advance for your kind consideration.

Best Regards

JinHyeock

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Hope this helps...

-- Daniel Park

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