Re: [5gangip] Feedback on draft-xyzy-atick-gaps-00

Hi Tom,

On Mon, Jun 4, 2018 at 3:24 PM, Tom Herbert <tom@herbertland.com> wrote:

> As in previous versions, I think this one jumps into talking about
> specific solutions too quickly before articulating the problem. I
> would make section 3 either be "Problem statement" or "Requirements".
> In either case, the text should be generic for any solutions. For
> example, some requirements might look like:
>
>

> * A mapping system is needed to map identifier to locator
> * Access to the mapping system must done only by authorized entities.
> * Mapping system must mitigate DOS attack
> * IP addresses should not expose specific geo-location of users.
>
>
Thanks a lot for identifying these requirements.
We need a requirements document and the above is a very good starting point.

Regards,
Behcet

> etc...
>
> Once the problem or requirments are laid out, then it makes sense to
> talk about the specific solutions (should be section 4 in my model),
> how they try to address the problems and what their shortcomings are.
>
> I like the idea of section "General recommendations". This would be
> section 5 in the model I'm describing, but I suspect this is not
> complete. It should be driven to satisfy the requirements or solve the
> problem specified in the earlier section. Drawing parts from the
> specific solutions makes sense.
>
> Tom
>
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