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[6lo] Fwd: 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases

Kerry Lynn <kerlyn@ieee.org> Tue, 20 October 2020 02:20 UTC

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Subject: [6lo] Fwd: 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases
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From: Kerry Lynn <kerlyn@ieee.org>
Date: Mon, Oct 19, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Subject: Re: [6lo] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases
To: Shwetha <shwetha.bhandari@gmail.com>


Dears Chairs and authors,

Here are some comments on the draft. In general the document is
well-structured
and readable and I hope it proves to be useful.

Page 3
As Pascal points out s/6LoPWAN/6LoWPAN/ in four places.
s/make the need/create the need/
s/are uniquely different from/expand upon/
I think the point here is that the different 6lo link layers are uniquely
suited to different applications?

Page 4
s/wire/wired/

Section 3.4 (page 6)
Please delete the last sentence as it basically repeats the first sentence.

Regards, Kerry Lynn

On Sun, Oct 4, 2020 at 3:03 AM Shwetha <shwetha.bhandari@gmail.com> wrote:

> This initiates a 2nd WGLC on the use-cases and applicability draft:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/
>
> The first WGLC initiated in November 2018 didn't conclude due to lack of
> responses. However the workgroup has reviewed the latest revisions and
> authors have addressed the comments in -09 pending one comment
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6lo/Ib4P3Zq-CCf6Ye4uKLU-NIHlp_I/#
>
> As per the discussion at the 6lo session during IETF 108, this starts a
> WGLC. This WGLC will conclude in two weeks on Monday October 19th.
>
> Please send your comments to evaluate progressing this draft.
>
> Thanks,
> Shwetha
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