[6lo] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-deadline-time-05: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 09 July 2019 02:04 UTC

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Subject: [6lo] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-deadline-time-05: (with COMMENT)
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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-6lo-deadline-time-05: No Objection

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The changes to the Security Considerations on version -05 address my concern
about abuse of the deadline time.  Thanks for that, and I'm clearing my DISCUSS
now.

Editorial comments that are still relevant in version -05:

In the Introduction, please expand “BLE” on first use.

In “Terminology”, you’re citing RFC 8174, but not using the new BCP 14
boilerplate from there.  Please copy/paste the new boilerplate.

— Section 5 —

Why is DTL the length *minus 1*?  Doesn’t that invite mistakes?  Is there a
reason not to make it the length, and to say that 0 is not a valid value?  Do
you really need the extra size that the extra bit provides?