Re: [6lo] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06: (with COMMENT)

"Liubing (Remy)" <remy.liubing@huawei.com> Thu, 16 September 2021 05:20 UTC

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Thread-Topic: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [6lo] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Murray,

Thanks for your comment.

We will add the terminology in the next version. The response to Roman and Eric should be able to be found in other mails.

Best regards,
Remy
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主题: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06: No Objection

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I also support Roman's and Eric's DISCUSS positions.

Section 2 needs to be reviewed.  It defines "CID", "EV", "IPHC", "LAN", "MSDU", "OFDM", and "PSDU", but these terms are not used anywhere in the document.  It also defines "WAN" which is not used, though "LPWAN" is used yet not defined.

Please also define "6LR" someplace, or refer to its definition.  It first appears in Section 4.4, along with "6LBR" and "6BBR".  Perhaps there should be a mention of the 6LowPAN RFC in the Definitions section to import all of these definitions.