Re: [6lo] Minor Comments on the use case draft FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09.txt

 Dear Liubing.

Thanks for your comments.
As you said, the reference for IEEE 1901.1 is missing.

I will update the reference for IEEE 1901.1 in a next revision.

Best regards.

Yong-Geun.

2020년 7월 20일 (월) 오전 11:42, Liubing (Remy) <remy.liubing@huawei.com>님이 작성:

> Hello Yong-Geun and all,
>
> Thank you for updating this draft.
>
> Just a minor editorial comment: the informational reference for IEEE
> 1901.1 seems to be missing. You can find the document at
> https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/8360785.
>
> Best regards,
> Remy
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> 主题: [6lo] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Networks of
> Resource-constrained Nodes WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : IPv6 over Constrained Node Networks (6lo)
> Applicability & Use cases
>         Authors         : Yong-Geun Hong
>                           Carles Gomez
>                           Abdur Rashid Sangi
>                           Take Aanstoot
>                           Samita Chakrabarti
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09.txt
>         Pages           : 25
>         Date            : 2020-07-13
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the applicability of IPv6 over constrained
>    node networks (6lo) and provides practical deployment examples.  In
>    addition to IEEE 802.15.4, various link layer technologies such as
>    ITU-T G.9959 (Z-Wave), BLE, DECT-ULE, MS/TP, NFC, and PLC (IEEE
>    1901.2) are used as examples.  The document targets an audience who
>    like to understand and evaluate running end-to-end IPv6 over the
>    constrained node networks connecting devices to each other or to
>    other devices on the Internet (e.g. cloud infrastructure).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/
>
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09
>
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