Re: [6lo] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-08

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Carles Gomez Montenegro <carlesgo@entel.upc.edu>
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Subject: Re: [6lo] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-08
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Hi Carles, 
The changes look good to me. Note that since my comments were nits, I had already marked the review completed.  
Thanks,
Acee

On 12/8/20, 3:27 AM, "Carles Gomez Montenegro" <carlesgo@entel.upc.edu> wrote:

    Hi Acee,

    Sorry for the late reply, and thanks a lot for your review of the draft!

    We just submitted -09, which aims at addressing the last round of review
    comments, including yours:
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-09
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-09

    We believe that we incorporated your points below into the document.

    Should you have further comments, please do not hesitate to let us know.

    Cheers,

    Carles (on behalf of the authors)



    > Reviewer: Acee Lindem
    > Review result: Has Nits
    >
    > Hello,
    >
    > I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
    > The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
    > drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and
    > sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide
    > assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing
    > Directorate, please see ​
    >
    >   http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
    >
    > Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs,
    > it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other
    > IETF Early Review/Last Call  comments that you receive, and strive to
    > resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.
    >
    > Document: draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-08.txt
    > Reviewer: Acee Lindem
    > Review Date: October 31st, 2020
    > IETF LC End Date:
    > Intended Status: Standards Track
    >
    > Summary: This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits
    > that should be considered prior to publication.
    >
    > Comments:
    >
    > The document extends the 6LoWPAN mechanisms to Bluetooth mesh network.
    > The document is well written and didn't and fairly easy to read given the
    > subject matter. Since I had not followed this standard previously, a
    > rudimentary understanding of RFC 7668. Additionally, familiarity with
    > RFC 6282 mechanisms is required to understand the header compression
    > extensions. My Routing Directorate review was primary from the routing
    > perspective.
    >
    > Major Issues: None
    >
    > Minor Issues: None
    >
    > Nits:
    >
    >    In section 3.2, it would be better to reference route-over in RFC 6775
    > in
    >    the first paragraph as it is essential to the viability of the subnet
    >    model.
    >
    >    Define or Expand acronyms in figure 1 before using.
    >
    > Editorial suggestions:
    >
    > ACEE-M-3B86:Desktop acee$ diff draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-08.txt.orig
    > draft-ietf-6lo-blemesh-08.txt 153c153 <    subsequent Bluetooth versions
    > (e.g.
    > Bluetooth 4.2 [BTCorev4.2] or
    > ---
    >>    subsequent Bluetooth versions (e.g.,  Bluetooth 4.2 [BTCorev4.2] or
    > 199,202c199,202
    > <        -  - +-------------------------------------------------+- - - HCI
    > <             |               Bluetooth LE Link Layer           |
    > <             +-------------------------------------------------+
    > <             |                Bluetooth LE Physical            |
    > ---
    >> Host   -  - +-------------------------------------------------+- - -
    >> Controllor  |               Bluetooth LE Link Layer           |
    >> Interface   +-------------------------------------------------+
    >> (HCI)       |                Bluetooth LE Physical            |
    > 293c293
    > <    6LN, 6LR and 6LBR IPv6 addresses in an IPv6 mesh over Bluetooth LE
    > ---
    >>    6LN, 6LR, and 6LBR IPv6 addresses in an IPv6 mesh over Bluetooth LE
    > 296c296
    > <    Multihop DAD functionality as defined in section 8.2 of RFC 6775 and
    > ---
    >>    Multihop Dupicate Address Detection (DAD) functionality as defined in
    > section 8.2 of RFC 6775 and 317c317 <    (e.g. very short-lived
    > connections) it
    > may not be worthwhile for a
    > ---
    >>    (e.g., very short-lived connections) it may not be worthwhile for a
    > 331c331
    > <    Bluetooth device address using the same compression context, the
    > ---
    >>    the Bluetooth device address using the same compression context, the
    > 342c342
    > <    Advertisements the Bluetooth LE hosts MUST, respectively, follow
    > ---
    >>    Advertisements, the Bluetooth LE hosts MUST, respectively, follow
    > 440c440
    > <    if the node is battery powered.  A router (i.e. a 6LR or a 6LBR) MUST
    > ---
    >>    if the node is battery powered.  A router (i.e., a 6LR or a 6LBR)
    >> MUST
    > 443c443
    > <    listeners for multicast groups the packets belong to.
    > ---
    >>    listeners for multicast groups to which the multicast packets
    >> destined.
    >
    > Thanks,
    > Acee
    >
    >
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