[6lo] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-minimal-fragment-08

[Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-6lo-minimal-fragment-08
Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review Date: 2020-01-30
IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-31
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication. However, I noticed the
normative reference to an informative document,
draft-ietf-lwig-6lowpan-virtual-reassembly (ref. 'LWIG-VRB'), which is
problematic, since this draft is on the standard track.

Major issues: -

Minor issues: -

Nits/editorial comments:

* Last paragraph of Section 5, I suggest a minor reformulation for clarity.

OLD:
   An associated
   caveat is that on a half duplex radio, if node A sends the next
   fragment at the same time as node B forwards the previous fragment to
   a node C down the path then node B will miss the next fragment.
NEW:
   An associated
   caveat is that on a half duplex radio, if node A sends the next
   fragment at the same time as node B forwards the previous fragment to
   a node C down the path then node B will miss the next fragment from node A.