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Re: [6lo] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14: (with COMMENT)

Yong-Geun Hong <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> Tue, 14 March 2023 11:24 UTC

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Date: Tue, 14 Mar 2023 20:23:50 +0900
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To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [6lo] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14: (with COMMENT)
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Dear   Alvaro Retana

Thanks for your valuable comments and sorry for the late response.

To resolve your comments, I updated the draft.

Please, find inline responses.

And, I submitted the revision draft based on your comments.
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-15.html

It is appreciated to check again and let me know any missing points.

Best regards.

Yong-Geun.

2022년 12월 15일 (목) 오전 12:48, Alvaro Retana via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>님이
작성:

> Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> (1) This datatracker page should indicate that this document replaces
> draft-hong-6lo-use-cases.
>
[Hong]  Asking IETF officers or WG chairs.

>
> (2) No references are included for BLE, DECT-ULE, NFC, and PLC.
>
[Hong] Add a reference of BLE, DECT-ULE, NFC

>
> (3) There are several references to specific IETF WGs.  This is not a good
> practice because the WGs may change, be re-chartered, or even cease to
> exist.
>
[Hong] Remove references of specific IETF working groups

>
> (4) No references are listed as Normative.  I find this hard to believe,
> given
> the characterization described here [1].  Please review the references and
> move
> the ones that "must be read to understand...the technology" to be
> Normative.
>
> [1]
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> https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/normative-informative-references/

[Hong] Move RFC 4861, 4862, 4919, 4944,  6568, 6606, 7228, 7400, 7428,
7668, 8105, 8163, 8200, 9159 into Normative

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