[6lo] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 09 August 2021 23:35 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-08-09
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-15
IESG Telechat date: 2021-08-12

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, no
more comments than those mentioned on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Section 1, "Efficient"->"efficient"
Section 4.4, "Solicitaitons"->"Solicitations"
Section 4.6, "octects"->"octets"; "constranied"->"constrained" ;
"fragements"->"fragments" Section 6, "aming"->"aiming"