Re: [6lo] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06: (with COMMENT)

Kerry Lynn <kerlyn@ieee.org> Tue, 28 February 2017 22:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [6lo] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Mirja,

Thanks for your review.  Comments inline...

On Wed, Nov 30, 2016 at 11:07 AM, Mirja Kuehlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
wrote:

> Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06: No Objection
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> 1) Agree with Ben that normative wording should not be used if it just
> summarizes things that are specified in a different doc.
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> See if my response to Ben is satisfactory for you.


> 2) Section 5: "A node implementing [RFC7400] MUST probe its peers for GHC
> support before applying GHC." How?
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> I deleted this sentence.  RFC 7400 discusses it.


> 3) Just to make sure I get the security section right: MS/TP networks are
> not connected to the Internet or use something like a gateway. Maybe make
> this point more clear: basically say that the reason to use IPv6 is NOT
> that you want to send these packets eventually directly to the Internet!
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> Not sure I wanted to create the impression that MS/TP nodes will never
connect to the Internet.  I reworked Sections 6 & 12 to make clear that
different methods of forming addresses are recommended depending on
the scope of the address.

Thanks again, Kerry