[6lo] Comments on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases Re: 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases

"Liubing (Remy)" <remy.liubing@huawei.com> Mon, 02 November 2020 06:38 UTC

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Subject: [6lo] Comments on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases Re: 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases
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Hello authors,

Thank you for your great efforts on the draft.

Regarding to the structure of the draft, the section 4 and 6 seem to be both talking about usage scenarios. An option is to merge these two sections. And the technologies mentioned in the section 3 are not perfectly aligned with the ones mentioned in the usage scenarios. For example, the G3-plc is not mentioned in the section 3.

Best regards,
发件人: 6lo [mailto:6lo-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Shwetha
发送时间: 2020年10月4日 15:03
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主题: [6lo] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases

This initiates a 2nd WGLC on the use-cases and applicability draft:


The first WGLC initiated in November 2018 didn't conclude due to lack of responses. However the workgroup has reviewed the latest revisions and authors have addressed the comments in -09 pending one comment https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6lo/Ib4P3Zq-CCf6Ye4uKLU-NIHlp_I/#<https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6lo/Ib4P3Zq-CCf6Ye4uKLU-NIHlp_I/>

As per the discussion at the 6lo session during IETF 108, this starts a WGLC. This WGLC will conclude in two weeks on Monday October 19th.

Please send your comments to evaluate progressing this draft.