[6lo] Minor Comments on the use case draft FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09.txt

"Liubing (Remy)" <remy.liubing@huawei.com> Mon, 20 July 2020 02:42 UTC

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Subject: [6lo] Minor Comments on the use case draft FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09.txt
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Hello Yong-Geun and all,

Thank you for updating this draft. 

Just a minor editorial comment: the informational reference for IEEE 1901.1 seems to be missing. You can find the document at https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/8360785.

Best regards,
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主题: [6lo] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Networks of Resource-constrained Nodes WG of the IETF.

        Title           : IPv6 over Constrained Node Networks (6lo) Applicability & Use cases
        Authors         : Yong-Geun Hong
                          Carles Gomez
                          Abdur Rashid Sangi
                          Take Aanstoot
                          Samita Chakrabarti
	Filename        : draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-09.txt
	Pages           : 25
	Date            : 2020-07-13

   This document describes the applicability of IPv6 over constrained
   node networks (6lo) and provides practical deployment examples.  In
   addition to IEEE 802.15.4, various link layer technologies such as
   ITU-T G.9959 (Z-Wave), BLE, DECT-ULE, MS/TP, NFC, and PLC (IEEE
   1901.2) are used as examples.  The document targets an audience who
   like to understand and evaluate running end-to-end IPv6 over the
   constrained node networks connecting devices to each other or to
   other devices on the Internet (e.g. cloud infrastructure).

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