Re: [6tisch] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20.txt

"Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com> Tue, 26 March 2019 19:57 UTC

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From: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com>
To: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
CC: "Eliot Lear (elear)" <elear@cisco.com>, "int-dir@ietf.org" <int-dir@ietf.org>, "6tisch@ietf.org" <6tisch@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [6tisch] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20.txt
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Pascal,

Closing the loop, this addresses all the comments I made (and others I had not realized) and in my opinion improves the document.

Many thanks for spending the cycles in entertaining the review feedback!

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Carlos Pignataro, carlos@cisco.com<mailto:carlos@cisco.com>

“Sometimes I use big words that I do not fully understand, to make myself sound more photosynthesis."


On Mar 1, 2019, at 1:35 PM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com<mailto:pthubert@cisco.com>> wrote:

Dear all:

Draft 20 was published to address the comments by Eliot and Carlos, both great and thoughtful suggestions.
The text was not changed dramatically, but some restructuration happened, in particular to make section 3 lighter.
We have an open issue on the terminology, do we keep it there or resplit to a separate document.

Let us talk at the IETF meeting – Carlos and Eliot, you are more than welcome to attend out slot and discuss the proposed resolution as published in -20.

All the best,

Pascal

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