Re: [6tisch] Quick review on draft 15

Thomas Watteyne <thomas.watteyne@inria.fr> Fri, 26 February 2016 14:08 UTC

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Authors,
I went through the changes between v14 and v15 on the bitbucket repo and
agree with the changes made.
Thomas

On Fri, Feb 26, 2016 at 11:22 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <
pthubert@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hello Xavi:
>
>
>
> I’m not asking for any change change but editorials. In particular I do
> not see a need to say that minimal could be disabled. Anything can be
> disabled, it’s always an admin decision to implement a protocol. The
> important thing is that minimal does not preclude the use of other TSCH
> traffic on other timeslots.
>
>
>
> As I reread the draft, I have some editorial suggestions, feel free to
> pick or not:
>
>
>
> “bitmap in the active cell indicate that a node” -> indicates?
>
> “This results in ‘’Slotted Aloha’’ behavior” -> This results in a behavior
> that is similar to that of ‘’Slotted Aloha’’.
>
> “acknowledgement” -> acknowledgment
>
> “neighbour” -> neighbor
>
> “EBs MUST NOT be used for time” -> EBs are not used for time
>
> “rank” -> Rank  (when talking about RPL’s Rank)
>
> “Routing extension headers such as RPI and SRH and inner
>
>    IP headers MUST be compressed according to [RFC6282],
>
>    [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch].”
>
> ->
>
> “
>
> Routing extension headers such as RPI [RFC6550] and SRH [RFC6554], and
> outer
>
>    IP headers in case on encapsulation MUST be compressed according to
>
>    [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch].
>
> “
>
>
>
> Also: [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch]
> should be normative references. Should not delay minimal if we last call
> soon.
>
>
>
> Take care,
>
>
>
> Pascal
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