Re: [6tisch] Mirja Kühlewind's Discuss on draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-24: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
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Subject: Re: [6tisch] Mirja Kühlewind's Discuss on draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-24: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hello Mirja

Your time is appreciated, many thanks for considering this draft.

The 6TiSCH Architecture has been a WIZp throughout the lifespan of the WG. It may be seen as its main product, most of the needed components being requested from other WGs.

This may be unusual but that was the plan from the start: produce a rather generic iot stack out of IETF components, which when we started were full of gaps and overlaps.

5 years later we have open source implementations that went through multiple interop tests, all under the group’s monitoring.

So the Architecture is not there to tell us what to do next but rather how what we (many iot relater WGs) built and how it works together.

The decision to go for informational is not mine. But what’s the point to have normative References in an informational draft?

Again, many thanks.

Pascal

> Le 7 août 2019 à 17:48, Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> a écrit :
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> I only had a quick read of this document, however, it seems to me that there
> are strong dependencies on a whole bunch of drafts, that are only listed as
> informational. I don't have a deep enough understanding to make a final
> judgement of which draft would need to be listed as normative references,
> however, I wanted to raise this point on the discuss level in order to ensure
> that this is considered before publication.
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> To give an example: Section 4.6.3 goes quite seep into details of what's
> described in [I-D.ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery]. However as long as
> [I-D.ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery] is not published yet, the 6tisch arch should
> probably not rely on the content of this draft that strongly. Putting
> [I-D.ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery] as a normative reference ensures that this
> draft will not be published before [I-D.ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery].
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> As I said, I only had a rather brief read, however, I had a bit of problems to
> follow exactly which parts of the architecture rely on existing protocols and
> mechanisms and where 6tsch actually needs to define new approaches. Maybe a
> short, even higher-level overview than section 3, could address this and help
> the reader.
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