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Re: [6tisch] FW: comments/thoughts/edits on 6tisch-architecture

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Mon, 17 December 2018 12:16 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
CC: Thomas Watteyne <thomas.watteyne@inria.fr>, "Shwetha Bhandari (shwethab)" <shwethab@cisco.com>, "'6tisch@ietf.org'" <6tisch@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: FW: [6tisch] comments/thoughts/edits on 6tisch-architecture
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Hello Michael
> 
> Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> wrote:
> > I pushed a slight update; Many thinks for your revisions! Please let
> > us know when you are done, so we can make the publication request.
> 
> I will do another round today, and get to the end of the document.
> 
> mcr> 3) is: "domotics" a word I don't know, or a typo?
> mcr>    (section 1, last paragraph)
> 
> > [PT>] It's home IOT : ) https://www.linguee.fr/anglais-
> francais/traduction/domotic.htmlChanged to "home automation for domotic
> >          applications."
> 
> okay... maybe the word you want is "domestic"?

[PT>] Well, I understand that domotic is a common neologism, but that's maybe around here, and in France we use domotique a lot. I removed the term since it appears that it can be controversial...

All the best

Pascal

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