[6tisch] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-13: (with COMMENT)

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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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One question: How is the proxy priority supposed to be calculated/set? Is there
a default value?

Is also support points raised in Roman's discuss points. More clarification is
needed.

Editorial comment:
I would recommend to repeat the abstract in the intro as, as stated in the RFC
style guide RFC7322 section 4.3, "[...] an Abstract is not a substitute for an
Introduction; the RFC should be self-contained as if there were no Abstract."

Nit: sec 1.3:
s/Although However/Although/ or s/Although However/However/ ?
s/a unicast RS may be transmitted in response[RFC6775] reduces the amount
of.../a unicast RS that may be transmitted in response [RFC6775] reduces the
amount of.../ ? (Also note missing space before [)