Re: [6tisch] WGLC for https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-17.txt

Yasuyuki Tanaka <yasuyuki.tanaka@inria.fr> Thu, 06 December 2018 13:48 UTC

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Hi Pascal,

I'm reviewing the architecture draft, although the deadline has already passed... I have one comment.

I see some ideas which don't have concrete protocol specifications discussed as WG drafts, for instance, centralized reservation and tracks. They look like kind of "concepts" at this moment. 

Can we keep them in the architecture draft whose intended status is now Standards Track? I read RFC7127, "Characterization of Proposed Standards", but, I'm not sure...

This should have been raised when you asked by https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6tisch/qxeFuhVNGV5wXjgz1yHY8Mp8e1I

Sorry for the late comment.

Best,
Yatch


> On Nov 11, 2018, at 3:22, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> wrote:
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> Dear WG :
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> We are now starting the working group last call for the 6TiSCH Architecture based on https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-17.txt. This document is the merge of the previous architecture and terminology documents.
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> Authors of our WIP WG docs draft-ietf-6tisch-dtsecurity-zerotouch-join-03, draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-00, draft-ietf-6tisch-minimal-security-08 and draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-01 are requested to pay particular attention on how their work is reflected in the Architecture, and are strongly encouraged to propose new text to improve the correctness of that representation.
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> The architecture is a foundational product of the WG, providing the view on the whole stack that we designed, implemented and interop tested over the 5 years of activity of the group; it is in some form a testimony of the WG.
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> With this in mind, please pay a very special attention when reviewing it.
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> The WGLC ends on Friday November 30th, 2018.
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> Many thanks in advance;
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> The chairs.
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