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Re: [6tisch] RobWilton review of draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-13

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Thu, 20 February 2020 13:02 UTC

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Comments: In-reply-to "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> message dated "Thu, 20 Feb 2020 12:07:22 +0000."
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Subject: Re: [6tisch] RobWilton review of draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-13
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Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com> wrote:
    > 1. Move the following paragraph from the end of the introduction near
    > to the top of the introduction, i.e. after the first introduction
    > paragraph.

A good idea, thank you.

    >    This document defines a new IETF Information Element (IE) subtype to
    > place into the Enhanced Beacon (EB) to provide join and enrollment
    > information to prospective pledges in a more efficient way.


    > 2. Add some additional text, something like the following before the
    > section 1.1:

    > "The following sub-sections explain the problem being solved, which
    > justify carrying the join and enrollement information in the EB."

will be done in -14.

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