Re: [6tisch] FW: comments/thoughts/edits on 6tisch-architecture

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Fri, 14 December 2018 17:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [6tisch] FW: comments/thoughts/edits on 6tisch-architecture
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Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> wrote:
> I pushed a slight update; Many thinks for your revisions! Please let us
> know when you are done, so we can make the publication request.

I will do another round today, and get to the end of the document.

mcr> 3) is: "domotics" a word I don't know, or a typo?
mcr>    (section 1, last paragraph)

> [PT>] It's home IOT : ) https://www.linguee.fr/anglais-francais/traduction/domotic.htmlChanged to "home automation for domotic
>          applications."

okay... maybe the word you want is "domestic"?

mcr> 6) I'd sure like to reference useofrplinfo in section 3.1, after:
mcr>     "Header (SRH) in non-storing mode" + as explained in useofrplinfo..
mcr>     but that would be a normative reference to a document that I can't
mcr>     promise will get to the IESG publication queue soon.  Would this MISSREF
mcr>     be acceptable?

> [PT>] I'll make the reference. We'll sort out the normative vs; not during
> the IESG review...

okay.

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