Re: [6tisch] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-22.txt

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [6tisch] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-22.txt
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This version addresses comments by Andy Malis for RTG DIR and David Mandelberg for SEC DIR.
A major item was and may still be the amount of non-WG-docs references.
We also touched the security section to inherit from DetNet.

All the best,

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [6tisch] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-22.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e WG
> of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : An Architecture for IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4
>         Author          : Pascal Thubert
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-22.txt
> 	Pages           : 64
> 	Date            : 2019-06-24
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes a network architecture that provides low-
>    latency, low-jitter and high-reliability packet delivery.  It
>    combines a high-speed powered backbone and subnetworks using IEEE
>    802.15.4 time-slotted channel hopping (TSCH) to meet the requirements
>    of LowPower wireless deterministic applications.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-22
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