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Re: [6tisch] Request for reviews for enrollment-priority draft

"Georgios Z. Papadopoulos" <georgios.papadopoulos@imt-atlantique.fr> Sat, 16 November 2019 14:40 UTC

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From: "Georgios Z. Papadopoulos" <georgios.papadopoulos@imt-atlantique.fr>
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Date: Sat, 16 Nov 2019 22:40:28 +0800
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To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles=40googlemail.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [6tisch] Request for reviews for enrollment-priority draft
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Hello Ines,

I have observed very few typos and one comment : 

- time-slotted channel hopping (TSCH) —> Time-Slotted Channel Hopping (TSCH)
- (the "pledge)” —> (the “pledge”)
- "6LRs that see this DIO Option SHOULD increment the minimum priority if they observe congestion on the channel used for join traffic.”
GP: channel here, I suppose it is ment the radio channel. Then between node A and B link, we have 16 radio channels.
Thus, in stead saying … congestion on the channel, we could have … congestion on the link (or subnetwork)?
- Finally, I am not sure if the standard should be written as 802.15.4 or IEEE 802.15.4.

My 2 cents,
Georgios


> On Nov 16, 2019, at 22:11, Ines Robles <mariainesrobles=40googlemail.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> We kindly request for reviews of the draft https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority/>, we understand that it is ready for Last Call.
> 
> Thank you in advance,
> 
> Ines, Dominique and Peter
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