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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
CC: "6tisch@ietf.org" <6tisch@ietf.org>, "6tisch-chairs@ietf.org" <6tisch-chairs@ietf.org>, "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>, "draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [6tisch] RobWilton review of draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-13
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Thanks for updating.

Rob

> -----Original Message-----
> From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Michael Richardson
> Sent: 20 February 2020 12:55
> To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>
> Cc: 6tisch@ietf.org; 6tisch-chairs@ietf.org; Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
> <pthubert@cisco.com>; draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-
> beacon@ietf.org; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [6tisch] RobWilton review of draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-
> enhanced-beacon-13
> 
> 
> Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com> wrote:
>     > 1. Move the following paragraph from the end of the introduction
> near
>     > to the top of the introduction, i.e. after the first introduction
>     > paragraph.
> 
> A good idea, thank you.
> 
>     >    This document defines a new IETF Information Element (IE) subtype
> to
>     > place into the Enhanced Beacon (EB) to provide join and enrollment
>     > information to prospective pledges in a more efficient way.
> 
> 
>     > 2. Add some additional text, something like the following before the
>     > section 1.1:
> 
>     > "The following sub-sections explain the problem being solved, which
>     > justify carrying the join and enrollement information in the EB."
> 
> will be done in -14.
> 
> --
> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works  -=
> IPv6 IoT consulting =-
> 
>

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