Re: [6tisch] Quick review on draft 15

Xavier Vilajosana <xvilajosana@gmail.com> Sun, 28 February 2016 06:15 UTC

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Subject: Re: [6tisch] Quick review on draft 15
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Dear Pascal, Thomas,

I will address the little indications given by Pascal and then publish v15.
Is that fine?

thanks so much!
X

2016-02-26 15:07 GMT+01:00 Thomas Watteyne <thomas.watteyne@inria.fr>fr>:

> Authors,
> I went through the changes between v14 and v15 on the bitbucket repo and
> agree with the changes made.
> Thomas
>
> On Fri, Feb 26, 2016 at 11:22 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <
> pthubert@cisco.com> wrote:
>
>> Hello Xavi:
>>
>>
>>
>> I’m not asking for any change change but editorials. In particular I do
>> not see a need to say that minimal could be disabled. Anything can be
>> disabled, it’s always an admin decision to implement a protocol. The
>> important thing is that minimal does not preclude the use of other TSCH
>> traffic on other timeslots.
>>
>>
>>
>> As I reread the draft, I have some editorial suggestions, feel free to
>> pick or not:
>>
>>
>>
>> “bitmap in the active cell indicate that a node” -> indicates?
>>
>> “This results in ‘’Slotted Aloha’’ behavior” -> This results in a
>> behavior that is similar to that of ‘’Slotted Aloha’’.
>>
>> “acknowledgement” -> acknowledgment
>>
>> “neighbour” -> neighbor
>>
>> “EBs MUST NOT be used for time” -> EBs are not used for time
>>
>> “rank” -> Rank  (when talking about RPL’s Rank)
>>
>> “Routing extension headers such as RPI and SRH and inner
>>
>>    IP headers MUST be compressed according to [RFC6282],
>>
>>    [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch].”
>>
>> ->
>>
>> “
>>
>> Routing extension headers such as RPI [RFC6550] and SRH [RFC6554], and
>> outer
>>
>>    IP headers in case on encapsulation MUST be compressed according to
>>
>>    [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch].
>>
>> “
>>
>>
>>
>> Also: [I-D.ietf-6lo-routing-dispatch] and [I-D.ietf-6lo-paging-dispatch]
>> should be normative references. Should not delay minimal if we last call
>> soon.
>>
>>
>>
>> Take care,
>>
>>
>>
>> Pascal
>>
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