Re: [6tisch] POST WGLC: draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-18.txt

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Tue, 11 December 2018 19:46 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Mališa Vučinić <malisa.vucinic@inria.fr>
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Many Thanks Malisa!

I’m a few hours east and almost tomorrow. I’ll look at it in the morning!

Take care,

Pascal, big fingers on a small screen that knows better.

Le 11 déc. 2018 à 23:12, Mališa Vučinić <malisa.vucinic@inria.fr<mailto:malisa.vucinic@inria.fr>> a écrit :

Hello Pascal, Michael,

I just opened a pull request on bitbucket rewriting the join process description. The PR is at:

https://bitbucket.org/6tisch/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture/pull-requests/1/update-join-process-description/diff

Could you take a look and if you agree, refine further.

Mališa

On Fri, Dec 7, 2018 at 6:15 PM Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com<mailto:pthubert@cisco.com>> wrote:
Dear all:

The WG last call for the architecture draft is now complete.
We received many comments and hopefully they are all sorted out and published in draft 18.
Reviewers, please look for the changes I made based on your comments in
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-18

There is one pending issue, what we do with ex-section 6.1 that is now Appendix A.

An suggestion is welcome, in particular from Malisa and Michael.
Happy to discuss that as a separate thread.
When this is sorted out, I guess we can ask for publication as a std track document/

All the best,

Pascal


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e WG of the IETF.

        Title           : An Architecture for IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4
        Author          : Pascal Thubert
        Filename        : draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-18.txt
        Pages           : 63
        Date            : 2018-12-07

Abstract:
   This document describes a network architecture that provides low-
   latency, low-jitter and high-reliability packet delivery.  It
   combines a high speed powered backbone and subnetworks using IEEE
   802.15.4 time-slotted channel hopping (TSCH) to meet the requirements
   of LowPower wireless deterministic applications.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-18
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-18

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-18


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>.

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