Re: [6tisch] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-06

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
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Subject: Re: [6tisch] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-06
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Hello Michael 

I agree with the format you selected, things are readable this way.
There are 2 or 3 typos in the new text that can be fixed with the editor.
Also I’m happy with the conclusions you made on the possible attacks.

All the best,

Pascal

> Le 22 janv. 2020 à 23:21, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> a écrit :
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> 
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-08&url2=draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-09
> 
> I have interspersed the security issues with each of the fields within the
> description of the fields in section 2.  This avoids enumerating the fields a
> second time, and is probably more in the face for implementers.
> This also makes it easier to review and avoids repeating what each field is.
> 
> On the other hand, it may a poor way to present this.
> 
> I am asking for the WG's opinion on whether to do it this way, or move it all
> to the Security Considerations section.
> 
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