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Alejandro Pérez Méndez <alex@um.es> Wed, 15 July 2015 09:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [abfab] I-D Action: draft-ietf-abfab-usability-ui-considerations-02.txt
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Hi,

here is my review of draft-ietf-abfab-usability-ui-considerations-02.txt.
In general, I've found no difficulties reading it, as it is very clear 
and complete. I have only a few minor comments some nits:

  * Section 5.1: s/internet/Internet
  * Section 5.1: A reference to Microsoft Cardspace would be nice.
  * Section 6: s/will need to managed/will need to manage
  * Section 6.1: s/user to authenticate themselves/users to authenticate
    themselves
  * Section 7: Does user-driven manual association take precedence over
    automated one? E.g.: when the user decides that a particular IMAP
    server will use ID2 instead of the rule "all IMAP servers will use
    ID1". If so, it might be useful to state it somewhere.
  * Section 11 and 12: Should these sections be moved to the end of the
    document, right before references section?
  * Section 13: A reference to DANE would be nice.

Regards,
Alejandro


El 07/07/15 a las 10:32, Alejandro Pérez Méndez escribió:
>
>
> El 06/07/15 a las 21:05, Leif Johansson escribió:
>> On 2015-07-06 18:10, Rhys Smith wrote:
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> I've updated the UI draft, finally. I think it’s now complete. Have 
>>> written the security considerations section and the error handling 
>>> section (the last two that needed doing), and tidied up some other 
>>> bits and pieces.
>>>
>>> Would still welcome all feedback and some more comprehensive 
>>> suggested text for both of those (security considerations & error 
>>> handling), but if none is forthcoming then in the interests of 
>>> getting this done and dusted I think it’s good to go. No more TODOs 
>>> left in the document at least :-)
>>>
>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-abfab-usability-ui-considerations-02 
>>>
>> Thx - I have a record of Ken volunteering to do a review of this once it
>> was updated.
>>
>> If you two (and others) could do a review we could move to WGLC this.
>
> I'll do a review as well.
>
> Regards,
> Alejandro
>
>>
>>     Cheers Leif
>>
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