Re: [abfab] AD review of draft-ietf-abfab-aaa-saml-12

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Mon, 23 November 2015 19:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [abfab] AD review of draft-ietf-abfab-aaa-saml-12
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On 23/11/15 19:45, Alejandro Pérez Méndez wrote:
> 
>>> Cheers,
>>> S.
>>>
>>> - abstract: last sentence is a bit hard to process - I think
>>> "permit application" isn't very clear, maybe re-word?
>>>
>>> - ID nits says: " -- Obsolete informational reference (is this
>>> intentional?): RFC 3588 (Obsoleted by RFC 6733)"
>>>
>> Can the author(s) deal with that in the publication process?
> 
> I can publish a -13 version with those fixes if that's required. But as
> the LC has been issued with -12 version, I'm not sure what to do.

Changes are minor so either would be fine, but let's say put out a
rev Dec 4th when the last call is done with these and any other
changes needed.

S.

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> Regards,
> Alejandro
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