Re: [abfab] AD review of draft-ietf-abfab-aaa-saml-12

"Klaas Wierenga (kwiereng)" <kwiereng@cisco.com> Sun, 22 November 2015 00:44 UTC

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> On 21 Nov 2015, at 08:31, Leif Johansson <leifj@mnt.se> wrote:
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> Skickat från min iPhone
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>> 20 nov. 2015 kl. 18:49 skrev Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>ie>:
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>> 
>> Hiya,
>> 
>> I did my review and have very little to say, which I'm
>> sure you'll agree is good:-) A couple of nits is all
>> and those are below.
>> 
>> I've asked for IETF LC to be started. And sorry for
>> taking a while to get to this.
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> There was plenty of tardiness on our part too. No need to apologize.
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>> 
>> Cheers,
>> S.
>> 
>> - abstract: last sentence is a bit hard to process - I think
>> "permit application" isn't very clear, maybe re-word?
>> 
>> - ID nits says: " -- Obsolete informational reference (is this
>> intentional?): RFC 3588 (Obsoleted by RFC 6733)"
> 
> Can the author(s) deal with that in the publication process?

Fwiw, I checked with Alejandro when I did the write up and it should indeed be 6733 

Klaas

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