Re: [abfab] AD review of draft-ietf-abfab-aaa-saml-12

Alejandro Pérez Méndez <alex@um.es> Mon, 23 November 2015 19:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [abfab] AD review of draft-ietf-abfab-aaa-saml-12
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>> Cheers,
>> S.
>>
>> - abstract: last sentence is a bit hard to process - I think
>> "permit application" isn't very clear, maybe re-word?
>>
>> - ID nits says: " -- Obsolete informational reference (is this
>> intentional?): RFC 3588 (Obsoleted by RFC 6733)"
>>
> Can the author(s) deal with that in the publication process?

I can publish a -13 version with those fixes if that's required. But as 
the LC has been issued with -12 version, I'm not sure what to do.

Regards,
Alejandro

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