Re: [abfab] AD review of draft-ietf-abfab-aaa-saml-12

Leif Johansson <leifj@mnt.se> Sat, 21 November 2015 12:31 UTC

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Subject: Re: [abfab] AD review of draft-ietf-abfab-aaa-saml-12
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> 20 nov. 2015 kl. 18:49 skrev Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>ie>:
> 
> 
> Hiya,
> 
> I did my review and have very little to say, which I'm
> sure you'll agree is good:-) A couple of nits is all
> and those are below.
> 
> I've asked for IETF LC to be started. And sorry for
> taking a while to get to this.

There was plenty of tardiness on our part too. No need to apologize.

> 
> Cheers,
> S.
> 
> - abstract: last sentence is a bit hard to process - I think
> "permit application" isn't very clear, maybe re-word?
> 
> - ID nits says: " -- Obsolete informational reference (is this
> intentional?): RFC 3588 (Obsoleted by RFC 6733)"
> 

Can the author(s) deal with that in the publication process?

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