[Ace] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)

[Robert Wilton via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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One minor comment:  I found it a slight leap in the introduction in the final
paragraph ("More detailed, ...") that talks about interoperable specifications
(implying that specification is not interoperable) and profiles (where it isn't
clear where these have come from).  So, an extra sentence to bridge the
concepts might be helpful in the introduction.  As a nit, the paragraph is also
missing a comma in "interoperate while".