[Ace] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-08

Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 07 July 2024 12:24 UTC

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Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody
Review result: Ready

# OPSDIR review of draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-09

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in the last call may be
included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs
should treat these comments just like any other last-call comments.

The document provides a mechanism for the Authorization Server to notify about
revoked access tokens via access to a Token Revocation List (TRL) on the
Authorization Server via CoAP. The document is clear and well-written. The
motivation is described well.

I did a review of
[-06](https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/ElqlgO6FHPsjoqw7L3gKkbSqVUo/)
in the past and have now compared the
[diff](https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-06&url2=draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification-08&difftype=--html)
with the latest version. The document is ready for publication.

Thanks!
Dhruv