Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 25 March 2021 11:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13
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Elwyn, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars

> On 2021-3-24, at 0:53, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2021-03-23
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-13
> IESG Telechat date: 2021-03-25
> 
> Summary:
> Ready for publication with the wxcption of one very minor nit.  Thanks for
> responding to my previous review.
> 
> Major issues:
> None
> 
> Minor issues:
> None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> s5:  This section cover current usage.  s1 anticipates the specifications mught
> find other usages, so... OLD: The confirmation method parameters are used as
> follows: NEW: The confirmation method parameters are used in
> [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] as follows;  it is anticipated that they may be
> used, potentially differently, in other profiles or protocols: END
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