[Ace] Comments on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile

Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Wed, 22 May 2019 21:58 UTC

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Subject: [Ace] Comments on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile
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Thanks for the updates from my last message.  This has helped quite a bit.

1.  A discussion of the use of raw public keys rather than certificates for
the server may be in order.  This can refer to the same RPK issues from the
current DTLS document.  It may also be that this just uses normal
certificate processing and that should be noted as well, but some discussion
of deciding if the subject name/alt name matches the token returned from the
AS.

For the connect message there are a couple of issues that need to be thought
about.

2.  What items are required to be in the connect message.  The response to
my last message suggested that a client identifier is required to be present
but that is not documented.

3.  It is not completely clear what portions of the CONNECT message are
being covered by the signature/MAC value.  As an example, is the password
field omitted entirely or is it set to a zero length password.  In addition
to this, from the couple of implementations that I have looked at the entire
packet is not passed out of the base server code for authentication
purposes.  This might need to be taken into account in terms of what is used
for the body and how it is constructed.  (As a side note, the
implementations that I have looked at so far also think that the password is
a text string rather than a binary value which is going to be a short term
issue as well.)

4.  I must admit that I am disappointed that there is no challenge response
mechanism in the MQTT specifications.  I don't know that anything can be
done at this point about it but there are some security issues that need to
be highlighted because of this in the security considerations section.  Only
the v3 seems to have this problem.  Also doing the channel binding would
deal with this problem as well.  Might just need some general discussions
around the channel binding text.

5.  Is there an intention to provide a "standard" format for the scope field
or just to leave it as ad hoc?

6.  It might be reasonable in section 2.1.3 to note that even if a result is
cached, that cached check should be limited for a specific amount of time to
recheck if the token is still active.  More of an issue in terms of how long
to cache for introspection.

7.  In section 2.1.4 - I would presume that the last paragraph should be
extended to say that the token is stored only for the length of the
connection.  That is the token always needs to be supplied every time a
connect message is sent.
 
Jim