Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-17.txt

Cigdem Sengul <cigdem.sengul@gmail.com> Wed, 23 March 2022 09:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-17.txt
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Dear Ace,
This version contains the text revisions to the AIF registration, Carsten
kindly made, and 2 minor fixes for improving clarity and addressing
reviewer COMMENT.

Kind regards,
--Cigdem

On Wed, 23 Mar 2022 at 09:08, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-TLS
> profile of Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments
> (ACE) Framework
>         Authors         : Cigdem Sengul
>                           Anthony Kirby
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-17.txt
>         Pages           : 45
>         Date            : 2022-03-23
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a profile for the ACE (Authentication and
>    Authorization for Constrained Environments) framework to enable
>    authorization in a Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-based
>    publish-subscribe messaging system.  Proof-of-possession keys, bound
>    to OAuth2.0 access tokens, are used to authenticate and authorize
>    MQTT Clients.  The protocol relies on TLS for confidentiality and
>    MQTT server (Broker) authentication.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-17
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-17
>
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