Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-08.txt

Cigdem Sengul <cigdem.sengul@gmail.com> Mon, 02 November 2020 00:47 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-08.txt
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Hello Ace,
This version addresses the WGLC reviews received on the mailing list. Thank
you Daniel, Francesca and Marco for your extensive reviews and discussion
on the mailing list.

A summary of changes from Version 07 to 08:

   o  Fixed several nits, typos based on WG reviews.

   o  Added missing references.

   o  Added the definition for Property defined by MQTT, and Client
      Authorisation Server.

   o  Added artwork to show Authorisation Data format for various PoP-
      related message exchange.

   o  Removed all MQTT-related must/should/may.

   o  Made AS discovery optional.

   o  Clarified what the client and server must implement for the client
      authentication; cleaned up TLS 1.3 related language.

Kind regards,
--Cigdem

On Mon, Nov 2, 2020 at 12:42 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Authentication and Authorization for
> Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-TLS
> profile of Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments
> (ACE) Framework
>         Authors         : Cigdem Sengul
>                           Anthony Kirby
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-08.txt
>         Pages           : 33
>         Date            : 2020-11-01
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a profile for the ACE (Authentication and
>    Authorization for Constrained Environments) framework to enable
>    authorization in a Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT)-based
>    publish-subscribe messaging system.  Proof-of-possession keys, bound
>    to OAuth2.0 access tokens, are used to authenticate and authorize
>    MQTT Clients.  The protocol relies on TLS for confidentiality and
>    MQTT server (broker) authentication.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile/
>
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-08
>
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