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Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Fri, 16 April 2021 09:20 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ludwig,

LGTM.

Thanks for accommodating my comments.

Regards,
Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>
> Sent: 16 April 2021 07:30
> To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz@ietf.org; ace-chairs@ietf.org; ace@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-
> oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
> 
> Hello Robert,
> 
> Thank you for reviewing this draft. Sorry for the long response time.
> 
> Version -39 addresses your comment, adding a sentence to bridge the
> comments as you suggested.
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-39
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Ludwig
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Robert Wilton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> > Sent: den 25 mars 2021 12:30
> > To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> > Cc: draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz@ietf.org; ace-chairs@ietf.org;
> ace@ietf.org
> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-
> oauth-
> > authz-38: (with COMMENT)
> >
> > Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
> > draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: No Objection
> >
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> >
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> > One minor comment:  I found it a slight leap in the introduction in the
> final
> > paragraph ("More detailed, ...") that talks about interoperable
> specifications
> > (implying that specification is not interoperable) and profiles (where
> it isn't
> > clear where these have come from).  So, an extra sentence to bridge the
> > concepts might be helpful in the introduction.  As a nit, the paragraph
> is also
> > missing a comma in "interoperate while".
> >
> >

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