Re: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-16: (with COMMENT)

Cigdem Sengul <cigdem.sengul@gmail.com> Tue, 22 March 2022 12:50 UTC

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Date: Tue, 22 Mar 2022 12:49:52 +0000
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To: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-16: (with COMMENT)
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Dear Murray,

Thank you. artart review comments were addressed in this pull request
<https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/105>.
I aimed to address your other comments in this commit
<https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/106/commits/ea868ecb5b52e1d39bc8909e20eb241bd377d964>,
which was part of the pull request.
(All other commits have applied, I haven't realised this didn't take
effect.) I will re-apply.
Kind regards,
--Cigdem



On Tue, 22 Mar 2022 at 12:19, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <
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> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-16: No Objection
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> Thanks to Jean Mahoney for her ARTART review.  I encourage the authors to
> respond at least to what she identified as minor issues.
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> Thanks for resolving my DISCUSS issue.
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> The final SHOULD in Section 2.4.2 seems weak to me.  I recommend using a
> non-BCP 14 "should" instead.
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