Re: [Ace] WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-coap-est

"Panos Kampanakis (pkampana)" <pkampana@cisco.com> Wed, 06 February 2019 18:21 UTC

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From: "Panos Kampanakis (pkampana)" <pkampana@cisco.com>
To: Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com>, "ace@ietf.org" <ace@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Ace] WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-coap-est
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Subject: Re: [Ace] WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-coap-est
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Hi all, 

The -08 version of the draft https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-08 addresses all comments we received so far in the WGLC. It also simplifies parts of the text to make easier to read, moves a couple of sections in more suitable order and fixes nits and typos. 

Thanks to everyone that provided feedback and mostly Jim and Esko for their thorough reviews.

For a summary of the issues received in WGLC and how they were addressed, refer to https://github.com/SanKumar2015/EST-coaps/issues?utf8=%E2%9C%93&q=is%3Aissue+is%3Aclosed+WGLC 

Let us know if there is more feedback.

Rgs,
Panos


-----Original Message-----
From: Ace <ace-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Jim Schaad
Sent: Tuesday, January 29, 2019 12:59 AM
To: ace@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Ace] WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-coap-est

This message concludes the last call for this document.  The authors are requested to create and post a new document addressing the issues that were raised.

Jim

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ace <ace-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Jim Schaad
> Sent: Sunday, January 13, 2019 8:03 PM
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> Subject: [Ace] WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-coap-est
> 
> The chairs believe that the EST over CoAP draft is nearing the point 
> it
should
> be sent to the IESG for publication.  We are therefore going to have a 
> Working Group Last Call on this document.  WGLC will until 29th of 
> this month.  Please review the document and send comments both 
> positive and negative to the list about its state.
> 
> Jim & Roman
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