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Sorry for late response. I=92ve looked through the changes and it overall c=
ontains many good clarifications and the new content is well presented. I h=
ad some questions about certain formulations in English but not being nativ=
e I leave that to RFC Editor.

Best regards
G=F6ran


From: Tim Hollebeek <tim.hollebeek=3D40digicert.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Date: Tuesday, 28 May 2024 at 11:15
To: ace@ietf.org <ace@ietf.org>
Subject: [Ace] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification

Hello,

Marco recently submitted a rather large set of changes in response to AD re=
view and IETF last calls.  Due to the size and number of the changes, Paul =
has asked that we have another WGLC to make sure the group has sufficiently=
 analyzed the new text.

So this is a 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification.  Due t=
o the amount of information to review, we=92ll give people three weeks.

So please review the latest version and send comments to the list by 17 Jun=
e 2024.

For the chairs,

-Tim

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Sorry for late response. I=92ve looked through the changes and it ove=
rall contains many good clarifications and the new content is well presente=
d. I had some questions about certain formulations
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Best regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">G=F6ran<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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S" style=3D"font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
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Hollebeek &lt;tim.hollebeek=3D40digicert.com@dmarc.ietf.org&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, 28 May 2024 at 11:15<br>
<b>To: </b>ace@ietf.org &lt;ace@ietf.org&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ace] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notificatio=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Hello,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Marco recently submitted a rath=
er large set of changes in response to AD review and IETF last calls.&nbsp;=
 Due to the size and number of the changes, Paul has asked that we have ano=
ther WGLC to make sure the group has sufficiently
 analyzed the new text.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">So this is a 2<sup>nd</sup> WGL=
C for draft-ietf-ace-revoked-token-notification.&nbsp; Due to the amount of=
 information to review, we=92ll give people three weeks.<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">So please review the latest ver=
sion and send comments to the list by 17 June 2024.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">For the chairs,<o:p></o:p></spa=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">-Tim<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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