[Ace] Nits in draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz

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Subject: [Ace] Nits in draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz
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Hello Ace,

I'm currently dealing with some nits in draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz that I have discovered during the final IANA check. For one of them I need group feedback: 

The draft defines a CBOR abbreviation for the Introspection parameter 'cti' which is the CWT identifier defined in RFC 8392, however it turns out that parameter was never defined as Introspection response parameter, it only exists as CWT claim.

 Can this draft just add 'cti' to the OAuth Token Introspection Response parameters without affecting the progress of the draft at this stage?


(For those interested, the other nits are: 1. Inconsistent IANA tables where some had the column "Original Specification" and some didn't for the CBOR
abbreviation mappings, 2. An obsolete reference that needed to be updated in an IANA entry).

/Ludwig



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