Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09.txt
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Subject: Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09.txt
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Mohit
Thank you for the update of the IANA Considerations section.
I spotted one additional minor issue in Section 2.6. To align the text with Section 2.1 of the draft and with CMP Updates I propose the following change:
OLD
coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/ann
coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/p/<profileLabel>/ann
NEW
coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/ann
coap://www.example.com/.well-known/cmp/p/<name>/ann
Hendrik
> Von: Ace <ace-bounces@ietf.org> Im Auftrag von internet-drafts@ietf.org
>
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Authentication and
> Authorization for Constrained Environments (ACE) WG of the IETF.
>
> Title : CoAP Transfer for the Certificate Management Protocol
> Authors : Mohit Sahni
> Saurabh Tripathi
> Filename : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-09.txt
> Pages : 11
> Date : 2023-04-14
>
> Abstract:
> This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol
> (CoAP) as a transfer mechanism for the Certificate Management
> Protocol (CMP). CMP defines the interaction between various PKI
> entities for the purpose of certificate creation and management.
> CoAP is an HTTP-like client-server protocol used by various
> constrained devices in the IoT space.
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- Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-t… Mohit Sahni