[Ace] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: (with COMMENT)

[Lars Eggert via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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The IANA review of this document seems to not have concluded yet.

Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more
guidance:

 * Term "traditionally"; alternatives might be "classic", "classical",
   "common", "conventional", "customary", "fixed", "habitual", "historic",
   "long-established", "popular", "prescribed", "regular", "rooted",
   "time-honored", "universal", "widely used", "widespread".

Thanks to David Schinazi for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/_BxkOEZJVOgcLQdyMj3dV0NYRB0).

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Section 2.2. , paragraph 3, nit:
-    conditionalized access based on state outside the identification of
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Section 1. , paragraph 3, nit:
> structure that can be used for many different applications and as a specific
>                                ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Consider using "many".

Section 1.1. , paragraph 4, nit:
> ically secured (or transmitted in a secure way). This section discusses the i
>                                ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Consider replacing this phrase with the adverb "securely" to avoid wordiness.

Section 2. , paragraph 3, nit:
> identified (e.g., as part of the armor around it). The generic model of such
>                              ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Consider using "the surrounding armor".