[Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13

Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 23 March 2021 22:53 UTC

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Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2021-03-23
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-13
IESG Telechat date: 2021-03-25

Ready for publication with the wxcption of one very minor nit.  Thanks for
responding to my previous review.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
s5:  This section cover current usage.  s1 anticipates the specifications mught
find other usages, so... OLD: The confirmation method parameters are used as
follows: NEW: The confirmation method parameters are used in
[I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] as follows;  it is anticipated that they may be
used, potentially differently, in other profiles or protocols: END