[Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13
Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 23 March 2021 22:53 UTC
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Subject: [Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13
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Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2021-03-23 IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-13 IESG Telechat date: 2021-03-25 Summary: Ready for publication with the wxcption of one very minor nit. Thanks for responding to my previous review. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: s5: This section cover current usage. s1 anticipates the specifications mught find other usages, so... OLD: The confirmation method parameters are used as follows: NEW: The confirmation method parameters are used in [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] as follows; it is anticipated that they may be used, potentially differently, in other profiles or protocols: END
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