[Ace] Comments on draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-oscore-02

Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Fri, 12 July 2019 19:03 UTC

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1.  Abstract - You should probably be referencing
draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm.

2.  How much can we simplify this document is you don't duplicate all of the
text from key-groupcomm?

3.  See comment on the other document about using cnf.

Given the amount of duplication it is really hard to read these two
documents together as one is never sure if they are going to contradict each
other.

Jim