Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)

Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se> Fri, 16 April 2021 06:24 UTC

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From: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>
To: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Murray,

Thank you for reviewing this draft, sorry for the long waiting time.

Version -39 fixes your comment.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-39

Regards,

Ludwig

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> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-
> ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: No Objection
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> I share Eric V's concern about the apparently stale nature of the shepherd
> writeup.  It seems to be a common oversight lately.
> 
> I also agree with Eric about Section 3.  Nicely done.
> 
> Since I'm getting to this document last in our queue this week, I find I have
> little to contribute here that my colleagues didn't already include in their
> positions, save this one gem:
> 
> Section 8.2 should probably say explicitly that the registration should refer to
> this document, since that is a column of the registry to which you are adding
> an entry.
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