[Ace] EAT document (was Re: [Rats] CDDL for CWT, JWT, UCCS and UJCS)
Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Tue, 26 October 2021 17:20 UTC
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Subject: [Ace] EAT document (was Re: [Rats] CDDL for CWT, JWT, UCCS and UJCS)
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Laurence, I took a look through eat-11 just now. It's 70 pages to the appendix (17 pages of appendix), of which 28 pages (10 through 28) are about claims. 11 pages (section 8) is the CDDL. So let's say, not really 70 but 59 pages of content that requires human attention. 15 pages for privacy and security considerations. Section 7 concerns me. It's a profile for writing profiles. I wonder if section 3 (Claims) shouldn't come after section 6, before 7. section 6, which is about keys, maybe even should be earlier. To me, the document looks done to me. I think that there are wording fixes that would make it a little easier to read, but it sure looks finished to me. If there are still problems with some of the claims, maybe we could move those claims to another document. -- Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
- [Ace] CDDL for CWT, JWT, UCCS and UJCS Laurence Lundblade
- [Ace] EAT document (was Re: [Rats] CDDL for CWT, … Michael Richardson